Meat eating should be prohibited due to the environmental damage it causes: "A cow eats around 15kg of grains to gain only 1kg in weight. The meat industry is wasting our resources”. Go Veg
PERO: el oki en español no menciona nada sobre los granos. Si eso se omite solo se podria poner: "Meat eating should be prohibited due to the environmental damage it causes"
Eating Meat
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ResponderEliminarNo coma después de PROHIBITED
EliminarEs "A COW" no "AN COW"
Meat eating should be prohibited due to the environmental damage it causes: "A cow eats around 15kg of grains to gain only 1kg in weight. The meat industry is wasting our resources”. Go Veg
PERO: el oki en español no menciona nada sobre los granos. Si eso se omite solo se podria poner: "Meat eating should be prohibited due to the environmental damage it causes"
ya lo corregi le deje el texto por que explica mas sobre por que ser vegetariano :D
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EliminarSolo que yo cometí un error con un punto, el punto final. Deberia ser:
RESOURCES." GO VEG
puse el punto final fuera de las comillas y eso no es correcto. Disculpa.
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