Still "on" just for fashion. Animals need their skin, your not in need. Become humane indeed.
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en la cuarta linea borrar la coma despues de ONen la frase que dice ANIMALS NEED THEIR SKIN borrar el resto de la frase y cambiarlo por TO LIVE, YOU DON'T asi:animals need their skin TO LIVE, YOU DON'TEn la ultima oracion poner apostrofe despues de OTHERS'
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Still "on" just for fashion. Animals need their skin, your not in need. Become humane indeed.
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animals need their skin TO LIVE, YOU DON'T
En la ultima oracion poner apostrofe despues de OTHERS'
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